Urban Grace

Overall concept: excellent...

I have this itch on my left shoulder; this sort of frustrated, burning desire to 'level out' the line of the garage door; I want that line to be straight. If you're going for making the viewer (at least me) feel unbalanced, you've succeed. No joke, sitting in my office chair right now, I'm actually catching myself physically leaning to the left.

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The woman's contrast against the garage door is striking. The line separating her arm from the shutters seems touched up; it's fine, but... her biceps and triceps are strangely 'flat'. They catch the eye, certainly, but impose the overall effect of rendering the woman's appearance as having been 'tacked on' in post production.

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Again, overall, I admire the work. Just a few things stand out as jarring.

And I'm not, in any way, a photographer or artist. I'm a writer, absolutely 'grain of salt' this whole critique if you were hoping for a photographer's opinion.